Poetry Thursday 132 - Raining

 What a soggy start to the new year. 

Raining

 

Opened the curtains and saw the rain,

everyday soaking the soggy

 brain,

in spite of praying once again,

no change on the weather train.

  

Pouring down on gardens and fields,

dripping everywhere that isn’t sealed,

running in gutters and down the windshield,

pooling on roads and even in hayfields.

 

Oh when will this soggy pattern end,

enough to drive me round the bend,

when will gentle spring portend,

and add some warm and dry to the trend.

 

Change we need is on the way,

there is a little more brightness every day,

 looking forward to a first spring ray,

and the urge to go out and play.

 

Opened the curtains again today,

met with a vista of uninterrupted grey,

is there more rain on the way,

no surprise holidays taken far away.

©David L Atkinson February 2026

To the weather 

God Bless 

Writing - Tech stuff

 One of the factors that may ‘age’ your work is the technology you refer to in your work. It may be made more obvious when stories are transferred to screens. Even reading can pick up old tech, which may jar in the mind of your customer.

 

If you are writing an historical story, then the technology becomes secondary, but if you are writing about recent history, say the 1980s, then objects such as phones are very different from what we see today. There were no smartphones and the mobiles were the size of bricks and prohibitively expensive.

Cars may also be time-sensitive.  Even if you are writing in the present time, stay up-to-date. When I was writing Steele , as part of my preparation, I researched vehicles and weaponry and kept that document for the whole series of books, updating as was necessary. The exercise highlighted the capability of the weapons, which provided relevant background for the narrative. Similarly, vehicle performance and tech can provide an interesting  background that will appeal to some sections of your readership. 

This may seem unimportant but it is inclusive for some, and for those less driven by details, may skip a paragraph. The bones of your story are important because it demonstrates to the reader that you care enough to look after the details. 

Similarly, empathising with the action you are describing can introduce accurate realism, thus clothing the bones and giving your audience information on which to pin their own knowledge and imagination. The example I often use is the magazine capacity of handguns. When I began writing Steele, the biggest magazines only held 12 – 15 cartridges. By the time I finished the last book, there was a Glock with a magazine for many more bullets. 

If I were writing about nowadays, there would have to be an electric vehicle in there somewhere, and obviously AI, but updated in comparison to ‘Hal’ in 2001 A Space Odyssey.

In fact, writing the tech stuff I enjoyed greatly. Each to their own.

 

God bless

Poetry Thursday 131 - Thumbs

 Have you considered how much harder it is to be a thumb these days? There should be a union. Thumbs should stand together. 

Thumbs

 

Where would we be without thumbs,

opposable making us different, 

picking stuff as small as crumbs,

but the future, we were so ignorant.

 

Good luck, execute, pushing buttons,

as well as holding, we’re usual tasks, 

but the job accumulations

in 2lst century would fill a dozen casks.

 

Advent of push button technology,

increased the daily load,

puts pressure on physiology,

puts thumbs on the fitness road.

 

Thumbs require protection,

they should join a union,

avoiding exploitation, 

opportunity for voluntary abstention.

 

Smartphones the principle culprit, 

choices, messages, addresses and names,

all the old thumbs new billet,

not to mention playing games. 

 

So pray take a moment to ponder,

the demise of this doubty digit,

and take care not to squander,

the abilities to which you aggregate. 

©David L Atkinson February 2026 

Thumbelina 

God Bless 

Writing - Structure

 There are only three certainties in life, and today's blog is about one of those certainties, which, in fact, is change. If I’ve learned one thing in the last 7 ½ decades, it’s that change is almost constant, and the reason I bring it up today is that this is my first attempt to produce my blog using speech rather than typing away at my laptop.

I must admit I am totally impressed by these people who can sit in front of a microphone and just talk for 20, 30, 40 minutes or even longer. So I thought it was time that I had a go.

The subject of today’s blog really is about story structure and making it readable, accessible for people who like to read at night, but principally for anybody to read again at any time of the day. In the past, some authors have written long, wordy paragraphs and sentences and have been lauded by literary critics for their ability to write in English. When I wanted to start writing books, my aim was to make them as accessible as possible to as many people as possible, and I think I managed to do that by having in mind just a couple of strategies while I was actually writing.

At the moment, I am reading a book by Richard Osman, one of his Thursday Club mysteries. He is a very readable author, and obviously, to me, he seems to spend a lot of time planning and organising what he's going to write and then sticking to that plan, but it does one of two things.

Firstly, Osman writes short chapters. His chapters are probably no more than four or five pages long, and they are tied to specific parts of the story he's writing. For example, in all his Thursday club mysteries, he has chapters entitled ‘Joyce.’ Obviously, Joyce is one of the main characters in the stories. Not all these chapters are named like that, but every now and again, he'll throw one in and will write specifically about that one character and her view of how things are going at that point as a part of the plot. I think that's a sign his organisational style is really tight.

The second aspect is to be aware that, if you want your work to be as accessible as possible, is not to be too wordy. If you want to impress literary critics, then you may choose to write sentences that are long and full of polysyllabic words. On the other hand, if you want to entertain and help people feel relaxed and unstressed by what they’re reading, then you may choose a slightly simpler style, probably more like reading the Daily Mirror than reading the Times.

Richard Osman and many other authors seem to follow this basic strategy, and I think it’s a good idea, particularly if you're a new writer, that you actually consider very carefully who your audience is going to be and what your aim is in writing the book. Are you writing to entertain? Are you writing to impress critics and publishers? That, of course, is entirely up to you, but Richard Osman is a successful author, as is JK Rowling and Ian Rankin. Their styles are quite straightforward and not too verbose.

As a slightly amusing addendum which has nothing to do with what I’ve just produced but does concern most people around the world in these days of political turmoil, is Donald John Trump. As a child, if by some happenstance I broke wind, my mum or dad might say ‘have you just trumped?’ - meaning have I just farted. It seems rather apt that the man causing all kinds of trouble in his own country and all around the world should have adopted the name which means breaking wind.

God bless

 

Poetry Thursday 130 - Indecisive

 As you age, you expect your body and mind to change in several ways, perhaps not until you are older, but some changes may surprise you. 

Indecisive?

 

When the slightly shabby, dishevelled door closes,

real world separated by the blank portal,

decisions arise that once were not posers,

routine for an everyday mortal.

But now?

 

But when did all that change?

What stalled the everyday process?

When did decision-making have an age-range?

Where are the rules denying access?

But now?

 

New strategies are needed,

time taken may or may not be a factor,

a decision may be held until time is exceeded,

decision made without being the actor.

And now!

 One necessary act at this age is to avoid stress,

be forthright in doing absolutely nothing,

being passive probably won’t cause a mess,

observers will shake their heads at the abdicating.

It’s age.

©David L Atkinson February 2026

God Bless 

.Writing - Shorts beginnings

When choosing to write a short story, getting started can be the most difficult point. Inspiration can come from almost anywhere, so there are so many possibilities. You may decide on a subject, character, and place, then be very rigid in following your plan. That is good, but occasionally a phrase or sentence hits you, and you feel inspired. More fun but a little risky in that you may hit a creative brick wall. On the other hand, the sense of freedom is liberating. 

I was reading a novel last night when a phrase struck me as inspired. It was in the description of a scene by a character. The phrase was also a truth that anyone may come across. 

The idea concerning people living alone and as they age, how decision-making affects them. When the slightly shabby front door closes, what pressures affect decision-making? 

I suppose it struck a chord with me because in my reality, making decisions is becoming harder for many reasons. 

In fact, not only was I nudged to create a story, but a more immediate emotional reaction could be in the form of a poem. Watch this space. 

God Bless 

Poetry Thursday 129 - Evolution stalled

 I wrote this poem four years ago and was focusing on the UK, but now it seems to be appropriate to the whole planet. 

Evolution stalled

 

As an outsider, observing the human race is pain,

watching how they don’t develop again and again,

hoping for improvement in everything they do,

admiring new trends that they accrue.

 

The way they race forward ignoring history,

repeating mistakes a confusing mystery,

plunging cultures into familiar conflict,

wasted time spent developing peace as a construct.

 

Creating collectives like NATO and G7,

to discuss securities and fiscal heaven,

when really the welfare of the millions of many,

is of little concern to the rulers’ activity.

 

Global warming, inflation, war in Ukraine,

issues to test the sharpest brain,

yet we are saddled with the likes of Trump,

a self-centred, dim-witted, glory-seeking lump.

 

Evolution of species is inextricably linked,

to whether they continue or become extinct,

judging by the quality of international leaders,

we are about to revert to bottom feeders.

©David L Atkinson June 2026 

God Bless