Wednesday, September 17, 2025

Poetry Thursday 110 - Moods

 I enjoy writing and particularly producing poetry. It is a medium that allows for an immediate response and analysis of situations. I haven't decided whether or not I like this piece! That may seem strange because I have the power of veto and have spent a great deal of time considering the piece. It fits for me. 



Moods  

 

Stay with us, 

Stay with us 

Open your eyes,  

feel the mood in the country that flies, 

do the people feel happy. 


 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us 

Open your eyes,  

do we need to change the mood that flies,  

 or should we just wait till it passes.  

 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us,  

Open your eyes,  

is it too late with the mood that flies,  

will it hurt me and my children?  

 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us,  

Open your eyes,  

we didn’t worry about the mood that flies,  

good people just did nothing.  

©David L Atkinson September 2025 





God Bless



Monday, September 15, 2025

Writing - Mood

 Have you ever started to watch a film (movie) and turned it off because it was too ... dark, miserable, obscure, confusing etc? Your emotional response to a story, whether on film or written, is in the hands of authors and directors. Sadly, you cannot control the emotional response of an audience, but you can consider the level of negativity or positivity you're trying to convey when telling your story. 



In the case of the written word, description of setting is one method, as well as the interaction between characters. This is the point at which you need to consider the audience for whom you are writing. 

It is at this point that you decide whether you have a calling to be a storyteller or whether you just need to make money and believe that this is a method at which you can be successful. If it is the former, then there will be groups who may not be attracted to your subject or style. (You can't please all of the people all of the time.) If you want to be popular, you may drive yourself to distraction trying to please everyone. 


My advice would be to establish your mood and be aware of the need to move on, ensuring that your readers remain engaged and re-energized by a change. One of the most striking examples for me was the musical Les Misérables, and the role of the innkeeper and his wife. The mood of the show is dark, full of pain and pathos, but the directors of the show produced this comic moment, which almost created an audible sigh. They managed to maintain the greedy and heinous nature of the couple later in the show, but for just that moment, there is some light relief. In fact, having read the Victor Hugo novel, there is no such light relief. 

Be true to yourself and your style. 

God Bless 





Wednesday, September 10, 2025

Poetry Thursday 109 - Diversity in the blood

Aethelstan ascended the throne of Wessex in 924 AD. By 927 AD he had united small kingdoms into what we now know as England. 


Aethelstan 

First King  

 

Turns out Aethelstan was the man,  

with intelligence and a future vision,  

devised an ambitious plan,  

a land of Angles to be his creation.  

 

Mercians accepted Aethelstan at once,  

Wessex were slower to concur,  

in 925 agreed final acceptance,  

but Vikings unlikely to defer.  

 

So to Northumbria to tackle the Vikings,  

a thornier diplomatic process,  

involving less talk and more fightings,  

the Nordic tribes had Aethelstan in a vice.  

 

 

 Resolute, the would-be king,  

was determined to achieve his aim,  

the death of the ruling Northumbrian Viking,  

allowed him to fulfil his claim.  

 

The rulers in Scottish and Welsh land,  

agreed borders with our new king,  

and so was the birth of England,  

energy needed for maintaining.  

 

Aethelstan’s diplomacy was not over,  

looking to Europe for expansion,  

married off his sisters to uncover,  

allies to support more acquisition.  

 

So for almost 1100 years,  

from the moment of first inception,  

England has always been a diversity pioneer,  

with all the benefits of aggregation. 

©David L Atkinson September 2025 


God Bless 



Poetry Thursday 110 - Moods

  I enjoy writing and particularly producing poetry. It is a medium that allows for an immediate response and analysis of situations. I have...