.Writing - Shorts beginnings

When choosing to write a short story, getting started can be the most difficult point. Inspiration can come from almost anywhere, so there are so many possibilities. You may decide on a subject, character, and place, then be very rigid in following your plan. That is good, but occasionally a phrase or sentence hits you, and you feel inspired. More fun but a little risky in that you may hit a creative brick wall. On the other hand, the sense of freedom is liberating. 

I was reading a novel last night when a phrase struck me as inspired. It was in the description of a scene by a character. The phrase was also a truth that anyone may come across. 

The idea concerning people living alone and as they age, how decision-making affects them. When the slightly shabby front door closes, what pressures affect decision-making? 

I suppose it struck a chord with me because in my reality, making decisions is becoming harder for many reasons. 

In fact, not only was I nudged to create a story, but a more immediate emotional reaction could be in the form of a poem. Watch this space. 

God Bless 

Poetry Thursday 129 - Evolution stalled

 I wrote this poem four years ago and was focusing on the UK, but now it seems to be appropriate to the whole planet. 

Evolution stalled

 

As an outsider, observing the human race is pain,

watching how they don’t develop again and again,

hoping for improvement in everything they do,

admiring new trends that they accrue.

 

The way they race forward ignoring history,

repeating mistakes a confusing mystery,

plunging cultures into familiar conflict,

wasted time spent developing peace as a construct.

 

Creating collectives like NATO and G7,

to discuss securities and fiscal heaven,

when really the welfare of the millions of many,

is of little concern to the rulers’ activity.

 

Global warming, inflation, war in Ukraine,

issues to test the sharpest brain,

yet we are saddled with the likes of Trump,

a self-centred, dim-witted, glory-seeking lump.

 

Evolution of species is inextricably linked,

to whether they continue or become extinct,

judging by the quality of international leaders,

we are about to revert to bottom feeders.

©David L Atkinson June 2026 

God Bless 

Writing - Write your truth

 We are advised to write from our experience, or from where we're at. As I have outlined in previous blogs, this is not without risk. 

John Steinbeck 1902 - 1968 

Steinbeck's writing often drew on his experiences growing up and working as a manual laborer in the Salinas Valley, California. His works frequently explore themes of social injustice, the human condition, and the relationship between humans and their environment. 

His major works include:

• The Grapes of Wrath (1939): This novel, considered his masterpiece, tells the story of the Joad family as they flee the Dust Bowl for California. It won the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction in 1940.
• Of Mice and Men (1937): A novella about two itinerant ranch hands in California.
• East of Eden (1952): A multi-generational family saga set in the Salinas Valley, which Steinbeck considered his greatest work, exploring themes of good versus evil and the story of Cain and Abel.

Steinbeck complained publicly about government harassment. In a 1942 letter to United States Attorney General Francis Biddle, John Steinbeck wrote: "Do you suppose you could ask Edgar's boys to stop stepping on my heels? They think I am an enemy alien. It is getting tiresome." 

John Steinbeck won the 1962 Nobel Prize for Literature. 

Like many authors who were alternately lauded and vilified, Steinbeck wrote with passion. So write your truth and damn the consequences. 

God Bless 

 

Poetry Thursday 128 - Bucket Lists

The Bucket List has become part of our lives in the West. I remember when I was younger, there was no such term, and another that was absent from the language was 'gap year', but that is a different story. The idea of having a list of things you want to do before you die is either laudable or negative. The fact is in life you save up to do the things you want to do. If you can't save enough, then there are things that will always be out of reach. 

Bucket list

 

When you have time on your hands,

its a habit to make visitor plans,

to travel to places far and wide,

and see sights not previously spied.

 

To journey to all corners of the earth, 

to iconic locations deemed of worth,

and tick off a bucket list,

experiences previously missed.

 

But sometimes we overlook,

sites in our own nations handbook,

places closer to home,

no need the world to roam. 

 

Instead of the pyramids of Giza,

or the leaning tower of Pisa,

a visit to Niagara falls,

or walking on Chinese walls.

 

How about a walk on Roman walls,

or Cautley Spout waterfall,

a canal boat ride on the Falkirk wheel,

or a visit to the museum of the automobile.

 

It may be the ideal year,

to walk on the Wigan pier,

or to go to Cheddar Gorge,

and experience the history of Wortley Forge.

 

Try not to forget our gems at home,

temper the drive to wander and roam,

learn more about this diverse land,

appreciate the bird you have in hand.

©David L Atkinson January 2026

God Bless 

Writing - Be Positive

 It's always a bit of a trial putting those first words down on paper after you have made the decision to write. However, there is only you who will not make that initial step, and you shouldn't allow any naysayers to change your decision. 

I was fortunate in that my support was generously given, and criticism was constructive, and at no point did anyone tell me to give up. Looking back, my early efforts were riddled with issues, but within a couple of years and three books, I was receiving fewer criticisms and more praise. This spurred me on to complete 13 novels and three collections of poetry. 

Improvement in writing continues throughout the experience. This is particularly true if you continue to read other authors of all types. In doing so, it is also possible to see the development in other authors. 

Two of these very successful authors are Colin Dexter and his Morse series, and Ian Rankin with the Rebus series. Both collections are great reads, but they all started off tentatively and became increasingly strong as the series developed. If you enjoy crime fiction they are well worth a read. 

Obviously, some authors set off at a gallop like J K Rowling, whose Potter series hit the ground running, but even with that magnificent saga there are one or two books that didn't quite progress as smoothly. So when you are writing, you do need to concentrate on the quality of what you produce, as success isn't guaranteed.

The bottom line is to remain focused and positive about what you want to achieve, and at the same time, remember to congratulate yourself on what you have achieved when you produce 50k plus words in a book. That is no mean feat. 

God Bless 

Poetry Thursday 127 - Wood for Trees

 We've relied on them for thousands of years for everything from transport to bracelets. It is a beautiful natural medium that needs preserving. Norway has taken steps, a billionaire has taken steps, but if you are neither a member of the super-rich or a country but have a garden, you can do something. 

Wood for Trees

 

It has to be made from wood from trees,

not MDF, chip, ply or plastic stuff,

the real thing with roots and leaves,

and height, flexibility, and bark that’s rough.

 

Even after death, when stripped to the bone,

wood has a feel that is living and warm,

but perfection isn’t a factor alone,

it is less than ideal in whatever form.

 

With knots and beautifully patterned grain,

it can be used for a myriad of purposes,

each piece enhanced by the artist’s stain,

and unique irrespective of purchases.

Whether polished, stained or simply laid bare,

the material is merely enhanced,

for the benefit of all people to share,

the satisfaction of tastes advanced.

©David L Atkinson June 2022 

God Bless 

Writing - Witness accounts

 The dreadful killing of Renee Good in Minneapolis reminded me of the difficulty police have in filtering accurate witness accounts from those accounts that are not quite as accurate. I have a real-life example of how memory can play tricks on the mind when one is asked to recall something. 

What you see in the photograph are the steps in front of St. Paul's Cathedral, London. As often happens, groups tend to collect on those steps for group photographs. To set the scene, we have to go back more than thirty years to a time when I was involved in taking a party of school children for a four day visit to the capital. One of the sights we were visiting was St. Paul's, and that was where the drama began. 

When teachers take groups out of the school building, they have to check on the welfare of the kids frequently, which includes the number of children present. The stress of taking other people's children away is legion, but teachers believe in giving kids unique and memorable experiences. 

So we collected together on the steps outside the cathedral for the group photo and then set off walking the quarter of a mile or so to The London Museum. Inside the museum, we split the children into groups under the supervision of an adult, and off they went for a look round with a time to collect together to move on to our next event. When that occurred, we discovered one of the children was missing, and it was at this point that we asked people when and where the boy was last seen. It was at this point that we realised the range of discrepancies across the recollections of the rest of the group. 

Some claimed that the missing boy had been sitting with them on the cathedral steps for the photograph. 

Some claimed that they had walked with him from St Paul's to the museum. 

Some claimed they were looking at cars in the basement of the museum with the boy. 

However, all those stories were incorrect. In fact, the boy had left the group inside the cathedral to take a photograph, and by the time he'd come outside to meet up, we had already left. Obviously, the trauma for all at having lost a child in a city of 10 million people was awful, but everything was resolved safely later in the day. 

The statements made by all parties over the shooting of Ms Good have been influenced by differing views, different video lengths, and political bias. 

It would seem to me that the lady was unlawfully killed, but that is just my personal opinion. When we write, we have the opportunity to use this frailty of memory and witness accounts to enrich our stories or even to throw in the odd red herring where it is appropriate. 

Keep writing. 

God Bless