Wednesday, November 8, 2023

Poetry Thursday 13 - Remember, remember

An experiment testing AI poetry writing in comparison with an almost human.




 

Recall

 

He is the perpetual warrior but it was never his fault,

he was there because he needed work,

took the King's shilling for a ration of salt,

but became the pawn of any manipulative jerk.

 

And as required he died,

he battled and fought as commanded,

but no matter how hard he strived,

the soldier's life was ended.

 

So we show the final respect,

and give thanks for their living, 

hoping our belated feelings reflect,

appropriate depth for their dying.

 

We should try hard every November,

for their selfless gift to remember.

© David L Atkinson November 2023 


AI as opposed to Human!




AI Remembers

In somber hues we gather, hearts entwined,

To honor those who bravely faced their fate.

Their sacrifice, forever in our mind,

Their memory, a beacon to navigate.


We remember the fallen, souls so dear,

Whose valor and courage forever shine,

In fields of battle, they banished all fear,

Their spirits in our hearts, eternally entwined.


Their names carved deep on stones of solemn gray,

Their stories whispered by the winds that blow,

We pause to reflect on their final day,

And vow to never let their memories go.


For in our hearts, their legacy remains,

Their sacrifice, a song that forever reigns. 



You decide. For me the AI is smart but soulless. 


God Bless 


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