Wednesday, September 17, 2025

Poetry Thursday 110 - Moods

 I enjoy writing and particularly producing poetry. It is a medium that allows for an immediate response and analysis of situations. I haven't decided whether or not I like this piece! That may seem strange because I have the power of veto and have spent a great deal of time considering the piece. It fits for me. 



Moods  

 

Stay with us, 

Stay with us 

Open your eyes,  

feel the mood in the country that flies, 

do the people feel happy. 


 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us 

Open your eyes,  

do we need to change the mood that flies,  

 or should we just wait till it passes.  

 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us,  

Open your eyes,  

is it too late with the mood that flies,  

will it hurt me and my children?  

 

Stay with us,  

Stay with us,  

Open your eyes,  

we didn’t worry about the mood that flies,  

good people just did nothing.  

©David L Atkinson September 2025 





God Bless



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